把中文翻译英语..英语高手进

句子结构改了一下 不那么中式英文了~
I believe I can change !
I won't degenerate under the scold of the teacher
The only thing I can do is melting presure into impetus.

解释一下
英语里I can change等同于改变自己，加上myself就显得缀余了
criticism更倾向于评论 或是文学批评的意思，我觉得lz说的批评更接近于责骂，也就是scold吧~
最后一个分句翻成一句英文有点困难，动词太多了。都挤在一句里成分很乱呐~ 我擅自改动了一小下~ 更地道而且不影响表达的~。如果你喜欢直译原句子可以写为The only thing I know is I can do is melting presure into impetus。
通常“改变”会用put,change或者干脆没动词，我选的是接近于“化为”的melt，强调的是转化的过程，而change是没过程~，直接变的。
motivity是动力没错，不过经常用在物理学里，很容易误会滴~。
force强调强制力啊 在法律和经济领域用的更多~
举个例子吧~Children need an impetus to study.儿童学习需要动力。
因为找到了例句，所以放心大胆的用的impetus~

I believe I can change myself.
I won't degrade myself because of teachers' criticism .
I only know I can change pressure into motive force .

I believe i can change myself
I won't indulge myself because of the teacher's criticism,What I only konw is changing pressure into motivity.