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Yesterday,I was very busy. I got up early.I went to the supermarket with my sister.I bought a nice present for her.Because her fourteeth birthday is becoming.In the evening,we had a party .We sang snd watched TV. We were very happy .At the end of the day,my friend Ann cleaned the room.
Yesterday,I was very busy. I got up early.I went to the supermarket with my sister.I bought a nice present for her.Because her fourteeth birthday is becoming.In the evening,we had a party .We sang snd watched TV. We were very happy .At the end of the day,my friend Ann cleaned the room.
-I bought a nice present for her.Because her fourteeth birthday is becoming.
改为：I bought a nice present for her because her fourteenth birthday was coming 这里用的是过去进行式,另外,become是"成为"的意思,不是"到来"的意思
-In the evening,we had a party .We sang snd watched TV.
改为：In the evening, we had a party. We sang songs and watched TV.