看看这段英文有没有错

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/13 22:42:15
没有阳光,就没有日子的温暖;没有雨露,就没有五谷的丰登;没有水源,就没有生命;没有父母,就没有我们。没有亲情和友情,世界就会一片孤独和黑暗。这些都是很浅显的道理,没有人会不懂,但是,我们常常缺少一种感恩的思想和心理。

There is no sunlight, no warmth of life; there is no rain, no grain of Fengdeng; no water, there would be no life; no parents, there would be no us. No family ties and friendship, the world would be a lonely and dark. These are very simple truth, no one would understand, but we often lack an ideological and psychological Thanksgiving.

帮你修改一下吧,特别是句型上.
不然,会看的很累的..

There is no warmth of life if without sunlight; no harvest of grain without the rain;
There is no life if without water; we would not be existed if without our parents;
Our world will be full of dark and loneliness without friendship and family love.

All of these truth are simple and everyone knows.
However, most of the time, we don't have the thanksgiving mentality and ideology.