病句，在线等。

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My success is insignificant, although hundreds and thousands of my students’ success is just what I pursue, and it will also be the pride of your honorable university.

“and it will”那里有问题，怎么改？
讲一下语法，谢谢。

去掉"it will also be "

It 代指从句,在这里只能代指"although hundreds and thousands of my students",显然不对。因为 "hundreds and thousands of my students’ success"才是"the pride of your honorable university."

正确的为
My success is insignificant, although hundreds and thousands of my students’ success is just what I pursue, and the pride of your honorable university.

时态不一致，改为 and it is

这句话说得逻辑好像有问题啊，

however it will

and it is also...
确定问题只有一个？
个人觉得，那个although加的异常诡异