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来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/23 09:24:22
当Tristan再次回到家时,鲁德罗上校步履蹒跚的走出房门的样子使我非常震惊。他在小黑板上歪歪斜斜写下我很高兴的词语。这一切的一切,我们看到的是一个孤独无助,但决不向痛苦命运低头的老人。
When Tristan came back home again, I was shocked by the shambling way that Colonel Wlliam Ludlow walked out from the room. He shivering wrote down a word that HAPPY on the blackboard. After all, we saw a lonely and helpless old man whom would never lower his head to the painful and cruel fate.

由于是手机,有字数上限,只提几点,望采纳.步履蹒珊那句可改为I am aghast at his shambling gait as he walked out.shivering可提前.最后一句whom改为who.lower改为droop

When Tristan came back home again, I was shocked by the way that Colonel Wlliam Ludlow walked haltingly out of the room. He aslant wrote down the words that made me happy, on the blackboard. After all, we saw a lonely and helpless old man who would never bend his head to the painful and cruel fate.

When Tristan came home again, when Lu Deluo Colonel stumbled along the look out of the door so I am very shocked. He crooked black board to write the words I am very pleased. All in all, what we see is a lonely and helpless, but it will not bow to the fate of the elderly suffering