高中英语短文改错10个错，在线等

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dear henry ,
i'm glad to receive your letter . it's pleasure for me to tell you my plan for this come summer vacation after the college entrance exam .
most commonly , the majority of the students will choose to attend in various training courses , so as to broadening their horizons . meanwhile , some others were likely to spend time traveling as well as volunteering , as a way to accumulate social experience . of course , a good rest is necessary needed because we do feel exhausting after the hard work of all these years .
as for me , i decide to stay with my parents . for one thing , it provides me for a chance to communicate with them . for another hand , it is a good time to enjoy the family life before college . however , if possible , in no case will i hesitate to take a part in some social activities .
best wishes !

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