修改英语发表演讲稿z这句★★★★★★★★5

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/31 13:12:48
这是配合ppt,英语发表课发表用的演讲稿
看看有什么错误或不合适的表达没有,如何觉得哪句不合适,直接去掉按自己意思重写也行。
这篇稿子太书面语,可能的话,改的口语化一点
The notion is not exaggerating that blind star-worship will probably engulf young people whose discretion is not enough into abysmal darkness,and thus buried with them is the hope of future..

It's no exaggerating that blind star-worship will probably swallowing the young people into the unfathomable darkness and thus buried with them is the hope of future.. .Because their discretion is not strong enough.

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