UC知道英语找语病 请教
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if a man who has a settled purpose will surely succeed.Because he always has way,and everything will come to him what he wants.这句有哪些错误的地方
If a man has a settled purpose, he will surely succeed. Because he always has a way and everything he wants will come to him.
这是在原句基础上改动，若整体改动可采用一楼的改法，较通顺。
或者：A man with a settled purpose will surely succeed.Because he always has a way and what he wants will come to him.
不是很通顺.
A man with a settled purpose will surely succeed because he would always find a way and everything he wants will come to him.