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Helen Keller was a very famous writer.She was smart when she was young.When she was 6 months old,she can say a few words.But she fell ill and can't see,hear or talk at the age of two.She had a teacher,when she was 6 years old.Snd she learned to read though her hands.When she grew up,she became famouse.And she wrote her first book——The Story of My Life.

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Helen Keller was a very famous writer.She was smart when she was young.When she was 6 months old,she can say a few words.But she fell ill and can't see,hear or talk at the age of two.She had a teacher,when she was 6 years old.【S】nd she learned to read though her hands.When she grew up,she became famouse.And she wrote her first book——The Story of My Life.
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Helen Keller was a very famous writer.She was smart when she was little girl. At 6 months old,she was able to speak a few words. However, she was sick and could not see,hear and talk anything at two years old. Fortunately, She got a teacher when she was 6 years old, and she learned to read by hands.She became famous when grew up, and she wrote her first book——The Story of My Life.