达人帮忙找一下语法错误?

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/25 18:04:20
It is worth mentioning that I has been studying in Class for Honors Bachelor of Physical Science, which is set up by School of Chemistry and Materials Science, educating creative students with comprehensive theoretical knowledge as well as experimental skills in physical science

这一句有语法错误吗,尤其是最后那个从句,总觉得很别扭。谢谢了

非限制性定语不能这样用
which is set up by School of Chemistry and Materials Science and is to educate creative students with comprehensive theoretical knowledge as well as experimental skills in physical science
这样就不别扭了

has 改have

I did my Bachelor of Physical Science and it is worth mentioning that I was from the Class of Honors which is set up by School of Chemistry and Materials Science, in there creative students are educated with comprehensive theoretical knowledge as well as experimental skills in physical science.
因为你要突出你来自这个光荣班 所以后面我把学生用了被动 突出了学生

没问题吧