UC知道我的一篇英语演讲稿，帮我润色润色，看看二分半到三分时间，够不够长
来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/24 08:54:52
我自己写的，看看够不够长，我给50分！
Self-Confidence
Teachers and fellow students,my name is Xue Weijun.It’s my great honer to make this speech today.As you know,there are many factors that can contribute to your success,but self-confidence is the most important key to success.Liu Xiang is one of the most famous athletes in the world, because he is always optimistical, and his optimism comes from his confidence,so he nerverfeels nervous on the race. As a result, Liu became a best sportsman.Another example,you must ever have heard about the history of Mao Sui.He is confident,and he recommends himself,so finally he gets success.Romain Rolland said,‘To believe yourself and then others will believe you!’ Li Siguang was one such person.Many years ago,there were not so much oilfields in China but Li persisted in finding it.On this road,he met many problems but he was always full of confidence and thirty years late he found it in North-west China. So today I make this speech with confidence,and I be
Self-Confidence
Teachers and fellow students,my name is Xue Weijun.It’s my great honer to make this speech today.As you know,there are many factors that can contribute to your success,but self-confidence is the most important key to success.Liu Xiang is one of the most famous athletes in the world, because he is always optimistical, and his optimism comes from his confidence,so he nerverfeels nervous on the race. As a result, Liu became a best sportsman.Another example,you must ever have heard about the history of Mao Sui.He is confident,and he recommends himself,so finally he gets success.Romain Rolland said,‘To believe yourself and then others will believe you!’ Li Siguang was one such person.Many years ago,there were not so much oilfields in China but Li persisted in finding it.On this road,he met many problems but he was always full of confidence and thirty years late he found it in North-west China. So today I make this speech with confidence,and I be
长度差不多了，结构也可以，但是感觉逻辑有点乱，举例子的时候最好结合递进的观点，一层层的说出来比较好。不要把例子一下子丢出来。记住，举例，是为了说明观点的，每个 观点我觉得有一两个例子说明就可以了。例子的类型也不要重复，要各具有不同的代表性。
希望你成功~！
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