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剑6第98页 test 4 task 1
The two bar charts show that number of people who were married and divorced in th USA every decade from 1970 to 2000, and marital status of adult Americans in 1970 and 2000.
According to the first bar chart, there were 2.5 million marriages in 1970 and 1980. After 1980, the number of marriage had a slight decline by 0.25 million every decade until 2 million in 2000. And the number of divorces stood at 1 million in 1970, which had increase to almost 1.5 million in 1980. From this year onward, number of divorces had a similar decrease trend as that of marriages, to 1 million in 2000.
It can be seen from the second bar chart that the percentage of adults which got married in 1970 and 2000 is 70% and 60% respectively, which were the largest group. The ratio of never married had an increase, from 15% in 1970 to 20% 2000. By contrast, the rate of windowed and divorced represented an insignificant share, with less than 10%.
In summary, the number
The two bar charts show that number of people who were married and divorced in th USA every decade from 1970 to 2000, and marital status of adult Americans in 1970 and 2000.
According to the first bar chart, there were 2.5 million marriages in 1970 and 1980. After 1980, the number of marriage had a slight decline by 0.25 million every decade until 2 million in 2000. And the number of divorces stood at 1 million in 1970, which had increase to almost 1.5 million in 1980. From this year onward, number of divorces had a similar decrease trend as that of marriages, to 1 million in 2000.
It can be seen from the second bar chart that the percentage of adults which got married in 1970 and 2000 is 70% and 60% respectively, which were the largest group. The ratio of never married had an increase, from 15% in 1970 to 20% 2000. By contrast, the rate of windowed and divorced represented an insignificant share, with less than 10%.
In summary, the number
martial status 前面要加the ， 后面可以改成during 1970-2000
And 用多了，可以换成 in addition, followed by 或者是next comes...
第一段倒数第一句, number 前面要有the
第二段第一句，姐姐，这里有两个名词吧，你怎么不用复数的 group也是
第二句，the ratio of the people who were never married， 后面用括号括起来
by contrast 对吗？我记得是in contradictory\contrast?
最后一句number of people who are marriaged
你想问什么
1,The charts above show that....A..and B respectively
which had increase (时态错误）
文中两次出现Number of 两处的表达都有误 the number of ..or a number of
考试的时候注意语法拼写等错误
尽量把图标注目的地方表达出来
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评分没什么意义的。。。基本的错误避免了 意思表达连贯了 6分就差不多了 想拿高分的话 用词上要努力 还能高度概括 用话代替数据