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Make a choice and Make a difference
Most of us would agree that hardwork is definitely the key factor to success.So is patience,care and strong will.Besides those,there are some unpredictable factors,for instance,luck.Unpredictable means we human beings cannot control it.As if we can't control it,even luck seems to play an important role in making a person successful,I'd rather not take both hardwork and luck the same level.I'd like to give a thought that hardwork is more important than luck.
Here are my three reasons.Firstly,you do a right thing and then do a thing right.If you do things depending on luck and attemping to make them all right,do you think it's more effcient than do things based on theories?If we do things based on luck,then we don't need scientists,theorists and philosophers at all.All we need are predictors,wizards and probably some clowns.
Secondly,some would think like this way that certainly we should work hard,but at t