TOEFL 口语题

I recently joined a group on facebook, called 'life without music cannot exist', I personally 100% agree with that. for me? my favourite music is R&B music. R&B gives musicians space and freedom when singing and creating, the rythm and melody are just great. My favourite R&B singer is Babyface, his voice and songs are great definitions of R&B music.
however,different music express different kind of thoughts of the singers. I recently have a great crush on Lady Gaga, Gaga rocks! Lady Gaga's music is fresh blood of music, you can hear her songs every where, in clubs, cars, shopping centers, even from the mouth of my dad's. it's kind of funny isn't it? i guess it is because i play them a lot at home.
Music has always been a language of communicating, and that is why i love music so much.

这是我自己的版本，这周日我就考了呵呵
My favorite music is rock music.
kind of music is the lively beat of change of a whole society. Jimy Hendrix is one of the leader o