帮我修改一下一篇英语短文

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I read a book of “Shuchong” in vacation. The book name is “Pride and Prejudice”. It says a story about love. The heroine Elizabeth was born in a small village. She’s so beautiful. One day, some rich people come to the village. One of them is a man call Darcy. He wants to marry Elizabeth. But Elizabeth doesn’t like Darcy at all. Because of he looks very pride. Darcy never gives up. He changes his disposition hard. In the end Elizabeth discovers Darcy’s change. She accepts Darcy.
It’s a nine story. The writer also writes the others people. They know the wealth and fame. So they can’t find the really happiness.
I hope, Elizabeth and Darcy can always happy and happiness.
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I read a book of “Shuchong” in vacation. The book's name is “Pride and Prejudice”. It says a story about love. The heroine Elizabeth was born in a small village. She’s so beautiful. One day, some rich people come to the village. One of them was a man called Darcy. He wanted to marry Elizabeth. But Elizabeth didn’t like Darcy at all. Because he looks very pride. Darcy never gave up. He changed his disposition hard. In the end Elizabeth discovered Darcy’s change. She accepted Darcy.
It’s a nine story. The writer also writes the others people. They know the wealth and fame. So they can’t find the really happiness.
I hope, Elizabeth and Darcy can always be happy .

讲述一个故事时，时态要统一，都用一般过去式