中译英一题

In the park I saw a little boy holding the string of a kite overhead which was rising and falling at the mercy of the wind.

In the park, I saw a little boy with a kite line kite in the wind manipulated by his nose, jumping up and down.

In park, I saw a little boy holding a kite line in his hand,and the kite was controled by wind above him,up and down.

I saw a kid in the park, kite line in hand and the kite flied up and down over his head with the wind