帮忙看看我的作文有没有什么问题?

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These are the interesting results of activity survey at NO.10 middle. About 10 percent of all the students do homework every day. In fact, they have to do homework every day. A few of students do homework only three or four times a week. None of them do homework once or twice a week. As for play basketball, most students play basketball once or twice a week. Some students play basketball three or four times a week.15 percent of them play basketball every day. They are so active and I think they like playing basketball very much. Well, some students surf the Internet three or four times a week. A half of them surf the Internet once or twice a week. Only 10 percent of them surf in the Internet every day. Oh, I think if every body has plenty of time, everyone will surf the Internet every day.

我只是个初中生,大家谁帮偶看看,刚写的作文有什么语法问题?
能不能把不好的句子和错句子单独拿出来改正?我看着眼晕啊~~哦哦

here are the interesting results of activity survey at NO.10 middle school. About 10 percent of all the students do homework every day. In fact, they have to do homework every day. A few of students do homework only three or four times a week. None of them does homework once or twice a week. As for playing basketball, most students play basketball once or twice a week. Some students play basketball three or four times a week.15 percent of them play basketball every day. They are very active and I think they like playing basketball very much. Well, some students surf the Internet three or four times a week. A half of them surf the Internet once or twice a week. Only 10 percent of them surf the Internet every day. Oh, I think if every body has plenty of time, everyone will surf the Internet every day.

These are interesting results of activity survey at NO.10 middle. About 10 percent of all the students do homework every day. In fact, they have to do homework every day. A few of