汉译英”如果你是我眼中的一滴眼泪，为了不失去你，我将永不哭泣

If you were a teardrop in my eye， I would never cry so that I would not lose you.

楼上的翻译：

林gg - 总监 八级 专家的最臭。
snailte - 高级魔法师 七级相比之下最好，注意到了tear不可数以及用了虚拟语气，但是美中不足的是后面的for not losing you用法错误。

If you are one of my tears in my eye,for not losing you,I will never cry.如果句式不适合用过去时,应用一般现在时,前后的时态也应保持一致

楼主好！
If you are a tear in my eyes, for fear losing you, I would never cry。

If I was a tear in your eye,for not losing you ,I will never cry

if i were a tear in your eyes, for not losing you, i will never cry.