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1990年
我国某山区张各庄为对外开放单位,请用英语为来访外宾写篇简单介绍。内容要点如下:
1背景:张各庄远离其他村庄,过去,儿童上学困难。1988年成立本村小学。
2现状:教师3人,均为本村人,中学毕业后回村执教。学生48人;班级5个;学科6门——语文,数学,自然,音乐,美术,体育。
3学费:免费。
Zhang Ge Zhuang Primary School
Zhang Ge Zhuang is far away form other villages. There are no school in the past, so the children is difficult to go to school. Until 1988 ,they have build there own primary school.
Now, Zhang Ge Zhuang primary school has 3 teachers and 48 students. The teachers had finished the middle school and come back the village to teaching. All of teachers were come from Zhang Ge Zhuang.
The school has 5 classes and 6 subjects .These are Chinese, math, science, music, art and PE.
The important point is every student are free to study.

题目改为Primary School Zhang Ge Zhuang
there own改为their own

come back the village to teaching改为came back

All of teachers 改为All of the teachers
were come from 改为were from
The important point 改为The most important point

every student are free to study改为all the students are
或every student is

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