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My Family
There are three people in my family.My father,my mother and I.
My father is a (你爸是干什么的，填职业).He's (年龄)years old now.He's tall.My mother is a(职业).She's（年龄）.She's beautiful.I'm a student.I'm(年龄).I love my family!
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i live in a lovly family! There are three people in my family who are my dad,mum and me.Truthly,i love them forever and
I am soryy.
I am busy so i can not compete this task i have to go

My Family
My family have three menbers.There my mother,my father and me.
My father is a******(他做什么工作),he's ****(他的样貌).
My mother is a******,she's ****.
I am a student.
I like my family!