english daily !自已写的一点东西.. 高人指点!有无语法误

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/20 00:41:22
even though i have learned english for 3 years .. but i find i can speak fluently .specially in some chat room , such as icq chat room . when i get a stranger words .. i have to look them up in dictionary .
but i find it is really effectlly to chat there .. i learn a lot of useful phrase .
sometimes i wonder when i can speak english fluently as a native speaker .
the end

第一个learned换成studied会更好些
根据意思but i find i can speak fluently应该是否定的意思所以在can加not
when i get a stranger words 这里的get换成encounter,words 去掉s
i learn a lot of useful phrase 这句应该用过去了learn 变为leart, a lot of 后面应该跟phrase的复数

我目前觉得可以商榷的地方就这几句,说出来供参考,向你学习,我都没写日记的习惯了

in some chat rooms
such as icq chat rooms
when I get stranger words
in the dictionary
it is really effective
I learned a lot of useful phrases
as a native speaker逻辑错误
as an English/American native speaker

这是写的什么东西？日记吗？为什么是daily。。。正文就不说了，错误连篇。
写日记是好事，可是养成写中国式英语和生造句子的习惯，对你将来的英语学习有百害而无一利。

Even though I have studied English for three year, (I find0 I can't speak fluently. Especially when I am in chat room, eg. icq chat room, I always come across some words I don't understand. I have to look them up in the dictionary. Anyway, I find it is very useful to chat there---I have learned a lot over there. I wonder if I can speak as fluent as a native Eng