UC知道请教一段话的改错。10个左右
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Dear mun and dad,
I would like to invite you to a picnic on this Sunday.We shall leave our home at noon and then took a taxi to Peach Tree Park.I have already been prepared a delicious lunch for us to enjoy after we arrive the park.My friend,Hu Wei,will arrive early to the best spot for a picnic near a lake.I hope my friend can join us and I think you will like him.After the picnic,you can go for a boat ride on the lake.The boat had a tent to keep us cold.DO you agree to come?I'm looking forward to your reply.
I would like to invite you to a picnic on this Sunday.We shall leave our home at noon and then took a taxi to Peach Tree Park.I have already been prepared a delicious lunch for us to enjoy after we arrive the park.My friend,Hu Wei,will arrive early to the best spot for a picnic near a lake.I hope my friend can join us and I think you will like him.After the picnic,you can go for a boat ride on the lake.The boat had a tent to keep us cold.DO you agree to come?I'm looking forward to your reply.
on this Sunday->this Sunday
took a taxi->take a taxi
been prepared -> prepared
arrive->arrive at
go for a boat ride ->go boating
had ->has
keep us cold-> keep us from cold
DO you agree to come->Will you come?
注意时态和短语搭配
on this Sunday->this Sunday
took a taxi->take a taxi
been prepared -> prepared
arrive->arrive at
go for a boat ride ->go boating
had ->has
keep us cold-> keep us from cold
DO you agree to come->Will you come?
on this Sunday->this Sunday
leave our home ->leave home
took a taxi->take a taxi
been preparrive-> prepared
arrive->arrive at
early ->eatlier
boat ride->boat riding
keep us cold-> keep us from cold
DO you agree to come?->DO you agree ?