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Other product areas include local area network systems that link comptuters,and hardware,such as the Microsoft Mouse pointing device .Microsoft also produces datebase software,such as Microsoft Access,and multimedia applications that range from child's products to reference materials. The company publishes computer related and technical books through its Microsoft Press.
其它的产品区域包括当地用来连接电脑的局域网系统,和硬件比如微软鼠标定点器.微软也生产数据库软件比如Microsoft Access和多媒体应用软件从小孩的产品到参考资料.公司由微软出版社出版相关的电脑书籍和电脑技术书籍

Other product areas include local area network systems that link comptuters,and hardware,such as the Microsoft Mouse pointing device .Microsoft also produces datebase software,such as Microsoft Access,and multimedia applications that range from child's products to reference materials. The company publishes computer related and technical books through its Microsoft Press.

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其它产品区域包括连接comptuters 的地区网络系统, 并且硬件, 譬如微软老鼠点击设备Microsoft 并且导致datebas