急急急急……请问各位大虾,帮帮忙!!!!!有追分

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1.When I was young, my father had one of the telephone in our neighborhood.
2.I still remember an old case fastened to the wall.
3.The shiny receiver hanged on the box.
4.I even remember number ---- 105.
5.I was too little to reach the telephone, but had used to listen with fascination when my mother talked with it.
6.Once she lifted me up to speak to my father, he was away on business.
7.Then I discovered somewhere inside the wonderful telephone lived an amazed person ----her name was “Information, please” so there was nothing she didn’t know.
谢谢

1.telephones
one of后面要用复数

2.fastened on
fasten on强加于

3.is hanged
话筒是被挂上去

4.the number
特指

5.got used to listen
get used to do过去常常做

6.but he was away on business
两句话要用连词来连接

7.amazing
"令人惊讶"要用ing形式

1. telephones
2. an--the
3. hang--hung
4. remember 加上the number
5. 去掉had
6. 加上 when he was away ....
7. amazed--amazing