大家麻烦帮忙看一下，这篇英语文章有没有错

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/12 18:46:41
看到错就帮忙改一下拉，最好说明了
good morning,everyone.my name is ???.I'm glad to be here for introduce myself.
I'm a 14-year-old girl.I have the Very extensive interest,hearing pop music,swim and so on.They make my life colorful.above all,I'm a outgoing and easygoing girl.
对不起亚，我忘记了，呵呵

good morning,everyone.my name is ???.I'm glad to be here introducing myself. I'm a 14-year-old girl。 As it is the age with energy, I have many hobbies, such as swimming, listening to the pop music and tennis( 最好用3个爱好，要不然说服力不够，我给你加了一个打网球你可以改的）and they make my life with full of passion and excitments. Also it makes me a outgoing and easygoing girl. Thanks!

给你改了一些 excitments ：带有激情的事情 passion: 活力 energy: 活力的另外一种说法 tennis：网球

恩，我英语还可以，不过你的文章在哪呢？
大哥……

问问题的是MM的话就太可爱了，我喜欢粗心的MM

文章在哪呢？