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我们老师要求我们写一篇英语的童话作文.可我才高一,英语水平有限,而且我的想象能力也不是很好,所以请大家帮忙想想剧情,我在线等.急着要的....我想了一点,麻烦你们接着写....谢谢了
大致是这样的:一个天使,不过她只有一个翅膀,而不是一双,所以她显得很另类.........拜托了....
大家多多发言啊.....
She is a angel . She has a pretty face.And she has two big eyes. But she is very different from other angels, it is because she has only one wing. But as you know, the others has a pair of wings.She was so sad, and belittle herself. She never spoke to the other,even if she has a wonderful voice. When an angle tried to speak with her, she always remained dumb. Because she thinks other angles spit on her. So she was used to go about alone.
这是我刚写的,水平有限,一定哟有很多错...大家帮忙修改...顺便想想下面怎么写
大致是这样的:一个天使,不过她只有一个翅膀,而不是一双,所以她显得很另类.........拜托了....
大家多多发言啊.....
She is a angel . She has a pretty face.And she has two big eyes. But she is very different from other angels, it is because she has only one wing. But as you know, the others has a pair of wings.She was so sad, and belittle herself. She never spoke to the other,even if she has a wonderful voice. When an angle tried to speak with her, she always remained dumb. Because she thinks other angles spit on her. So she was used to go about alone.
这是我刚写的,水平有限,一定哟有很多错...大家帮忙修改...顺便想想下面怎么写
然后流浪 看到也是只有一个翅膀的天使 ，然后在一起~一起飞
……天使都是善良的，所以并没有排斥她，反而很照顾她．但是因为自己的另类、无法飞翔，她显得很孤僻，也很自卑。
有一次，非常照顾她的天使长在飞翔时突然下坠，大家措手不及的时候，她飞起来接住天使长。看见大家微笑时，她终于明白，最重要的不是翅膀，而是一颗善良的、想飞翔的心灵。
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原来我的想象力比我想象中还要差……这个情节比较好写啦，没有什么复杂的单词，也可以用比较简单的句式。希望能够帮到你。