帮我一篇改错

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/17 17:32:43
1student are required to wear the school uniform
2for PE classes.And on the piayground or in the gym,
3you can see that students are willing to have the uniform on.
4Only a few of the eye-catching students are with uniform,while most
5wear casual clothes or anything else. Why dont they like uniform?
6 Because they think its a silly idea to make people wear same clothes.
7I believe the rejection of uniform reflects their desire for individuality.
8Now that society starts to respect individuality,schools should du even well.
9If the individuality is killed at school,what can it survive in society?
10Please return the color world to the lively students!
每行有一错误,其中一提正确

1.student->students
2.for -> in
3.you -> You
4.with ->? without
5.dongt -> don't
6.its -> it's
7.of -> to
8.du -> do
9.survive -> survives
10.to -> into

1 同上
2 同上
3 willing 改为 unwilling
4 对
5anything 改为something
6 its 改为 it same前加the
7 同上
8well改为 better
9what 改为 how
10 colour 改为 colourful

1.student->Students(句首字母大写;这里的学生是指“全体学生”,用复数)
2.for->in(整句意为"学生们被要求在体育课上穿校服","在体育课上"应为in PE classes)
3.willing->unwilling(从全文来看,意为"大部分学生不愿意穿校服")
4.with->wearing(这句意为"只有少数引人注目的学生穿着校服","穿着"应用wear)
5.anything->something(这是陈述句,用something)
6.its->it's(拼写错误)
7.正确(整句意为"我认为拒绝穿校服反映了他们对于个性的渴望")
8.well->better("学校应做得更好",用比较级)
9.what->how(整句意为"如果个性在学校被抹杀,它将怎样存在于社会上?",what后不能跟宾语,而句中的it是宾语,而且,要用how表示"怎样,如