英语短文 What did you do yestoday

i got up at 6 in the morning yesterday. i felt very sleepy, but i must go to school on time. then i had a shower and put on my school uniform. my mum has already cooked for me. i took 2 pieces of bread and went to school. I had 7 classes all day, and i felt very tired and boring.But my friend decided to go to the shopping centre, because she wanted to buy a gift for her mother's birthday. We walked for 2 hour and finally she brought something. I got home at 8pm, but i need to do my homework. Then i worked very hard and finished at 10pm, i felt that i am dying,so i got on bed very quikly.
随便写写，估计有点错吧，你自己改改吧！呵呵~~

Yesterday,juest an ordinary day for me.I got up at 10, and had my breakfast-lunch as usual.After that,it was about to get into my most favorite interest,yes,CS!Nothing could stop me! Before I went to bed at 12 at night,I had killed my little brother 723 times,oh,I was good.
PS:I forgot to have supper.

I am sorry for this.