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来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/26 00:28:09
I.. Fall in loved a women I shouldn't love ,
If god wants to punish this sin
Please , please condescend to push all the sin on me
我。。爱上了不该爱的女人

如果上帝想要惩罚这种罪过

请将所有的罪过降临在我一个人的身上

I fallen in loved with a womam that i should not love.

If God(一定要大写G) wants to punish someone for this sin
罪只是原因 不是被惩罚的对象

Please , please condescend to push all the sins on me

I.. fall in love with a womon who I shouldn't love ,
If god wants to punish this sin
Please , please condescend to push all the sin on me

That'ok~