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How has the computer changed our lives
Computer is playing a more and more important role in modern society. We can use it in industry and in universities to do complicated work. Nowadays, it’s also playing a role in our lives.
First of all, it takes us a convenient communication space. We have a new way to contact with friends. It is E-mail. When we have a meeting , and people right now at different places. We can use the computer contact with each other. The second change in our lives is the computer can widen our eyes. It can help us learn more about many fields of studies quickly. It included science, medicine, arts and so on. We also can know the latest news by the computer. I think it’s faster than the TV set. At last, the computer changed many students’ study method. A new method has appeared. It called distance education. Distance education comes in different formats. One of them is the online course. We can learn and study when and where
How has the computer changed our lives 这是题目么？
第一行We can use it in industry and in universities to do complicated work. 用it做主语比较好it can be used to do the complicated work of the industry or universities .
第3行it takes us a convenient communication space takes应该换成it provides us with a convenient communication space 或是it offers us a convenient communication space
第四行When we have a meeting , and people right now at different places改成 Now we can hold a meeting even if the people don't meet together at the same place.
第四行 We can use the computer contact with each other.单独的句子没问题，但是联系上文看，略显重复，可以改成And with the conputer we can keep in touch with each other .
第五行We can use the computer contact with each other. 应改成We can use the computer to contact with each other
第六行 The second change in our lives is the computer can widen our eyes 应改成The second changed in our lives is the computer can broaden our eyes
第七行It can help us learn more about many fields of