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I like to keep every congenial moment in my life in my memory, so I choose photos as the carrier of those moments. In the photos I took, seldom can you find a figure; most of my works are photos of mountains, villages and animals. A figure can spoil tranquil scenery easily, I think.
There are four pieces of my work; only one of them is a photo of a figure.
The first one is a picture I took in a college when I was at Cambridge.
Now, the second one. Two strange-looking flowers, aren’t they? They just look so lovely, like two pieces of desserts. It was taken in Northern Ireland.
Now, look at this peacock. This peacock always wandered in the court of Scone Palace. This piece won me the third prize in a competition.
The last one is a photo of a flute player. I think, you’ve already known where this photo was taken.
问题多多，请指教
There are four pieces of my work; only one of them is a photo of a figure.
The first one is a picture I took in a college when I was at Cambridge.
Now, the second one. Two strange-looking flowers, aren’t they? They just look so lovely, like two pieces of desserts. It was taken in Northern Ireland.
Now, look at this peacock. This peacock always wandered in the court of Scone Palace. This piece won me the third prize in a competition.
The last one is a photo of a flute player. I think, you’ve already known where this photo was taken.
问题多多，请指教
最后一句, I think后不用“，”
Now, the second one. Two strange-looking flowers, aren’t they? They just look so lovely, like two pieces of desserts. It was taken in Northern Ireland 这一句中第一句，the second one后的“。”改成“，”后一句的第一个字母随之变小写。