及求小学英语作文,要是用过去时写的

Yestorday
When I went to my school yestoday moning,my mother gave me a people,I was happy.Afternoon,I was in home,my mother give me a egg,I love my mother.Do you know?Yestoday was my birsday!My friend were not in my small house play until 9:00PM .

My Good Friend
My name is ×××.I have a good friend . Her name is Liu Yun. She lives in China . Her mather is a singer. She likes swimming. Her father is a TV reporter. He likes listening to mnsic. Liu Yun likes piaying the violin and riding her bike. Every morning , she goes to school on foot. Every evening, she reads newspaper ai home. Then she goes to bed at nine. This is my good friend Liu Yun.