UC知道把我改一下英语文章，要给分数哦！
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你用英语口头通知外宾今天新的活动内容.安排如下:
1.时间、地点:上午八带内半宾馆门口乘车
2.活动安排:上午参观一所有85年历史的中学
下午参观工业展览,那里展出着许多新产品,其中有些产品好获过今年全国发明奖.
3.意事项:准时上车,随身带好所需的物品.如有问题,欢迎询问.
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Ladise and gentlemen
I’m glad to be your guide. Today is a rainny day. So I’m afriad wn can’t visit the country lives. And we have a new plan for it since this morning. Ok !everybody please liten to me carfully:
We plan to visit the country lives changed into tomorrowm,and today please doon’t forget to get to gethet at 8:00at the hotel gate,and we are going to by bus .
The first we will go to visit a mid-school which ahs 85 years history schoolin the morning. And in the afternoon we’ll cisit a factory exhibition. There are some different kinds of new products. Some of them won the national prizes for invention.
Please be there on time. Don’t forger to bring the thongs you need with you . if you have my guestions ,you can ask me.<
1. 内容得8分。
2. 注意拼写，大小写，标点。这部分扣分：-0.5x8=-4
3. 严重语法错误扣分：-1x4=-4
4. 另外的3分基本得不到了。
所以总分是：8+12-4-4=12,
其实你可以做得更好，第2点完全可以捡回来4分，只要你写完检查一下就好了。语法错误要尽量避免，平时多读一下课文，培养语感，对于不确定的东西尽量不用，换个说法很多时候是最好的选择。对于高考作文，一般没必要追求后面的那个附加的3分(内容充实，连贯，用词准确等)。但是第2项和第3项应该尽量得分，控制在各扣1分的水平，这样你可以得到：8+12-1-1=18分就很好了。
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Ladise and gentlemen
==>Ladies写错了
I’m glad to be your guide. Today is a rainny day.
==>rainny写错了，应该是rainy(一般重读的单音节才会双写.如fun=>funny,而sleep变为sleepy时不双写p).
So I’m afriad wn can’t visit the country lives.
==>wn写错了，是we；afriad写错了，应该是afraid. 这里的country lives不是中国人看不懂，你应该指的是参观乡土生活，不过visit要么是参观具体的地点，要么是拜访人，不能这样用。可以这样改：
I'm afraid we can't show you the country lives.
或者：I'm afraid we can't visit the countryside.
And we have a new plan for it since this morning.
==>严重语法错误，后面有完成时标志since，主句用完成时态=>And we have had(或got) a ne