请检查一下有没有语法错误

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Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm a high school student.I like this pramground very much,especially is the English songs.I'm busy in studing,but when I feel tired,I will turn on the radio and listen to it.I can always study some words from the English songs,And "My Heart Will Go On"is my favorite,I want song's words of it.Could you give me one?
Yours sincerely,
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最后一句的意思是”我最喜欢我心依旧这首歌，希望得到歌词”
还有节目是不是用”pramground”?

节目是programme.
especially is the English songs.—〉especially the English songs.
studing—〉studying
I will turn on the radio and listen to it.—〉I turn on the radio and listen to it.
I want song's words of it.—〉I want to konw song's words of it.
Could you give me one? —〉Could you do me a favour?

1.I like this pramground very much,
“节目”打错字了，，，是programme(英式英语)或者program（美式英语）

2.especially is the English songs.
去掉那个is就可

3.I'm busy in studing
“学习”又打错字了：I'm busy in studying

4.but when I feel tired,I will turn on the radio and listen to it.
建议你把这个句子和前面那个句子拆成两句。
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However, when I feel tired, I will turn on the radio and listen to it.

5.I can always study some words from the English songs,And "My Heart Will Go On"is my favorite,I want song's words of it.
这句话太长拉。。分开两句写..
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I can always study some new words from the English songs, and "My Heart