哪位英语好的帮我写篇关于游览长城的日记

THE GREAT WALL April 4rd, 2006
I climbed the Great Wall with David and we went around everywhere we could find. Strong wind that day but our interests never wade. At first there's some cold but when we climbed on the top of the mountain we got sweat. Many foreign friends on the steps but few to climb the east part of the mountain. That afternoon we arrived the east mountain. Acrossed see the west mountain and the so high peak we used climbed, I'm proud of myself as well as my motherland.

I'm very happy can enjoy my pleasure with my friends who accompanied with me. But if my lover besides me, that will be greater. When I visited those lovely natural places always I have forgotten myself and nothing appeared but Nature and I. Unforgetable, weared a male suit and a big slipper, my hair was blowed in a mess, but never mind, I lost myself in my journey.

同学，我写了一些，你看看好吗？我还是学生所以写的东西不是很好！
THE GREAT WALL April 4rd, 2006 ,wednesday
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