帮忙写一分钟的speech..

我自编的speech,介绍纽约可以吗?

I love New York
Hi, everybody! Do you know this famous song sung by Frank Sinatra ?(如果你会,最好可以唱出来,不会的话你就读lyrics)
Hi, Everybody! I would like to start my speech with a famous song named New York, New York sung by Frank Sinatra.
“Start spreading the news, Im leaving today
I want to be a part of it - new york, new york
These vagabond shoes, are longing to stray
Right through the very heart of it - new york, new york

I wanna wake up in a city, that doesnt sleep
And find Im king of the hill - top of the heap

These little town blues, are melting away
Ill make a brand new start of it - in old new york
If I can make it there, Ill make it anywhere
Its up to you - new york, new york”

It is true, New York is a city that doesn’t sleep.Never before had I found any city so full of life, full of energy and full of opportunity. If you come to New York, you will be greeted by the Statue