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It's eight o'clock.The children usually go to school by bus every day ,but today thay are going to school on foot.It's ten o'clock.In the morning,Mrs.Wang usually stays at home every day,but this morning,she is going to shops.It's four o'clock.In the afternoon,Mrs.Wang usually drinks tea in the living room.but this afternoon,she is drinking tea in the garden.It's six o'clock,In the evening.The children usually do their homework,but this evening they aren't doing their homework.At the moment,they are playing in the garden.It's nine o'clock.Mr.Wang usually watchs television,but tonight,he isn't watching television.At the moment,he is reading an interesting book.

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