Tim写作文经常出错,看下面这篇短文,请你当个老师帮他改一改好吗??

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1.I like play football very much.

2.Last Sunday,I good and played football with my friends.It is sunny.

3.We have a good time.We went home on five in the afternoon.

4.After that,I finish my homework.

5.Then I eated my dinner at seven.

6.I watch TV before I went to bed.

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1.I like playing football very much.

2.Last Sunday,I went out and played football with my friends.It was sunny.

3.We had a good time.We went home at five in the afternoon.

4.After that,I finished my homework.

5.Then I ate my dinner at seven.

6.I watched TV before I went to bed.