小弟愚昧,请各位救一救我,看一看哪里有错处

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/20 05:41:27
Two days ago,i heard a news that is about the Italy football fans turbulence.In this event, there was a policeman was death. These fans were very crazy.They were destroied in the city's everywhere because they couldn't receive the football team was lost by the weak team which they support. As a result, this week's football match were put off until the problem was slove. So i have no match to see this night.
I don't know why the European love football so much. When they were child, they began to practise how to play it. On the contrary, we are hardly have no standard football ground. We use the place to build many building .I think This is the important reason why we are play football usually was defeated by European.

正确语句如下：
Two days ago,i heard news about the Italy football fans turbulence.In this event, there was a policeman dead. These fans were crazy.They destroied everywhere in the city because they couldn't accept the football team which they supported was beat by the weak team . As a result, the football match were put off for one week until the problem slove. So I have no match to watch tonight.
I don't know why the European love football so much. In childhood, they began to practise to play it. On the contrary, we hardly have a standard football ground. We use the place to build many buildings.I think This is the important reason why our footballteam was usually defeated by European.
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news必须有s，因为他是听说了一条新闻消息啊！！！Two days ago,I heard a piece of news about the Italy football fans turbulence.In this event, there was a policeman who had dead. These fans were very crazy.They were destroied everywhere of the city, because they couldn't accep