UC知道很急，明天要交，求改一改
来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/20 11:56:58
Two days ago,i heard a news that is about the Italy football fans turbulence.In this event, there was a policeman was death. These fans were very crazy.They were destroied in the city's everywhere because they couldn't receive the football team was lost by the weak team which they support. As a result, this week's football match were put off until the problem was slove. So i have no match to see this night.
I don't know why the European love football so much. When they were child, they began to practise how to play it. On the contrary, we are hardly have no standard football ground. We use the place to build many building .I think This is the important reason why we are play football usually was defeated by European.
I don't know why the European love football so much. When they were child, they began to practise how to play it. On the contrary, we are hardly have no standard football ground. We use the place to build many building .I think This is the important reason why we are play football usually was defeated by European.
第一行改a piece of news which was
第二行改who was death.
They were destroied 应该把were去掉
第四行this week's football match were put off 应把were改was
the problem was slove应把was去掉，slove改成sloved
第六行they were child应该改成children吧
第七行On the contrary中contrary是不是拼写错误？
第八行building 应该加s
第九行This is the important reason 中important应该用最高级吧
希望有用！！
连分都不给,吝啬谁会给你改呀?
they couldn't receive the football team was lost by the weak team which they support
第一行改a piece of news which was
第二行改who was death.
我要睡了，不好意思