我没有很多分,希望大家都同我改一改

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/30 18:00:06
Two days ago,i heard a news that is about the Italy football fans turbulence.In this event, there was a policeman was death. These fans were very crazy.They were destroied in the city's everywhere because they couldn't receive the football team was lost by the weak team which they support. As a result, this week's football match were put off until the problem was slove. So i have no match to see this night.
I don't know why the European love football so much. When they were child, they began to practise how to play it. On the contrary, we are hardly have no standard football ground. We use the place to build many building .I think This is the important reason why we are play football usually was defeated by European.

行,我帮你看。。。
不过我只是高中毕业啊,。。。
Two days ago,i heard a news that is about the Italy football fans turbulence.In this event, there was a policeman was (has/had)death. These fans were very crazy.They were destroied (改成加s,lot)in the city's everywhere because they couldn't receive the football team which they supportwas lost by the weak team (看看这一句,我改的). As a result, this week's football match were put off until the problem was slove. So i have no match to see this night.
I don't know why the European love football so much. When they were child, they began to practise how to play itandloveditverymuch. On the contrary, we are hardly have no standard football ground. We use the place to build many buildingand do any other things .I think This is the important reason why we are play football usually was defeated by European.
整体还可以,没有多少错别的哦