UC知道请大家帮我查查这段英语有无病句或需改进的！
来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/10 06:03:57
Hello,everyone!Today I want to talk about English with you.
English is one of the most important languages in the world,now it is widely used in buiness .Beijing will hold the 2008 Olympic games,at that time,there will be many foreigners come to Beijing,so we should learn English well.
We should study English carefully in classes.（这句对不对）
English is one of the most important languages in the world,now it is widely used in buiness .Beijing will hold the 2008 Olympic games,at that time,there will be many foreigners come to Beijing,so we should learn English well.
We should study English carefully in classes.（这句对不对）
very good
in classes 改为in class
Olympic games中games G大写
come不用改为coming,因为是定语从句,这个定语从句中的who可省略
there will be many foreigners come to Beijing,so we should learn English well.这句话有错，come改为coming。另外Olympic games的Games也要大写，games后面改为逗号，at that time的At大写