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Yesterday my English teacher asked each student write
a composition title "The Greatest Achievement of My
Life".I was not sure what to write about it.I've thought
it over for a long time.I did many things.Coming to
America,get a job and meeting new people were my
achievement.I think my greatest achievement was
learning English.Sometimes I didn't understand everything
people were saying,but each day I got better or better.
I told my teacher this was difficult composition to write.
Above all,it is hard to measure everything you have done
in your life.
Dear Helen,
Thank you so much for your party at Christmas Eve.All
of them enjoyed it very much.We liked the dishes you had
cooked but we were happy to learn the English songs you taught
us.We hope you'll teach us a lot many songs in the future.
We're leaving from our hometowns to spend the winter
vacations.It seems tha
a composition title "The Greatest Achievement of My
Life".I was not sure what to write about it.I've thought
it over for a long time.I did many things.Coming to
America,get a job and meeting new people were my
achievement.I think my greatest achievement was
learning English.Sometimes I didn't understand everything
people were saying,but each day I got better or better.
I told my teacher this was difficult composition to write.
Above all,it is hard to measure everything you have done
in your life.
Dear Helen,
Thank you so much for your party at Christmas Eve.All
of them enjoyed it very much.We liked the dishes you had
cooked but we were happy to learn the English songs you taught
us.We hope you'll teach us a lot many songs in the future.
We're leaving from our hometowns to spend the winter
vacations.It seems tha
student write 中加 to
去掉title
去掉it
去掉over
get→getting
think→thought
√
or→and
was后加a
you前加which
这是第一篇的答案！！~！~！~
第二篇：
at--on
them--us
but--and
a lot many--more
from--to
正确
busy to
not able--unable