UC知道短文改错（急啊！！）
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Mary works at a bank.She begin working at eight o'clock in the morning.She stops working on five o'clock in the afternoon.
At five o'clock the bank closes.Everybody goes to home.Some people drive home .Some people take the train.Some peoples take the bus .Mary walks home .She likes to walk .Se walks ,and walks,or walks.
At eight o'clock in the evening,Mary is home .He eats dinner.At ten o'clock she goes to the bed .Mary is tired.
She is eight-two year old.
谁来帮我改错啊！
改了有赏哦！
At five o'clock the bank closes.Everybody goes to home.Some people drive home .Some people take the train.Some peoples take the bus .Mary walks home .She likes to walk .Se walks ,and walks,or walks.
At eight o'clock in the evening,Mary is home .He eats dinner.At ten o'clock she goes to the bed .Mary is tired.
She is eight-two year old.
谁来帮我改错啊！
改了有赏哦！
Mary works at a bank.She begins working at eight o'clock in the morning.She stops working at five o'clock in the afternoon.
At five o'clock the bank closes.Everybody goes home......Some people take the bus.........Mary is at home.She eats dinner......she goes to bed.
She is an eighe-two year old.