To the one whom in my deep heart

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这句话对没?有语法错误没?~

如果只是一个告白或致词的开头的话,有三个错误
1.定语从句关系代词不对,若严格按照语法要求,the one 后面的的关系代词应该用that,who也ok。
2.定语从句没谓语动词,应该加上is。
3.说深藏在内心,最好用deeply in my heart,不要说in my deep heart。
所以这句话更正了应该是:to the one that(或者who) is deeply in my heart
不过简洁起见建议你说:to the one deeply in my heart

应该是:to the one who is deep in my heart

不对
应该把whom改成who
To the one who in my deep heart

To the one who <is> in my deep heart

who