UC知道麻烦高手检查一下这篇英语自我介绍有没有错误
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Good morning sir and madam,I’m Jianglin from Shandong Provins.It’s my pleasure to be here in front of you to introduce myself.I’m now studying in Grade3 in No.1 middle school of my hometown and my senior high period will be accomplished soon in this summer.
About my character, I can’t describe it well, but generally speaking ,i am a hard working student especially do the things I am interested in. and I am optimistic and confident. Sometimes i prefer to stay alone, reading, listening to music, but i am not lonely, In my spare time,I often go shopping with my friends,surf on the Internet and do some sports,such as running,table tennis and roller-skating. I even got the 4th prize in the 1500-meter race in my school sports meeting,which is a very glorious memmory.But now since I’m faced with National College Entrance Examination,I can’t spend too much time doing sports.But this busy life has also taught me how to balance between study and enter
Good morning，(改成ladies and gentlemen),I’m Jianglin from Shandong Provins.It’s my pleasure to be here (删in front of you去，重复) to introduce myself.I’m now studying in Grade3 in No.1 （middle？senior吧） school of my hometown and my senior high period will be accomplished soon in this summer.
Talking about my character,（删I can’t describe it well，but generally speaking 去,外国人不接受这种说法)I am diligent,open ,optimistic and confident. I work hard especially (when) doing the things I am interested in. Sometimes I prefer to stay alone, reading, listening to music, but i am not (lonely最好换成bookish书呆子气的), In my spare time,I often go shopping with my friends,surf on the Internet and do some sports,such as running,table tennis and roller-skating. I even got the 4th prize in the 1500-meter race in my school sports meeting,which is a very glorious memmory.But now since I’m faced with National College Entrance Examination,I have to spend less time on sports.But this busy life has also taught me how to b