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On the Internet
Internet is playing an important part in our daily lifes and bringing much convenience for us.We can watch news and get lots of informations.Through Internet, we can wend e-mail or make a call to our friends.Besides,Internet provides e-books to us and we can teach ourselves English.The most exciting thing I think are the entertainments such as listening to musics,watching sport games,playing computer games and shopping which can bring us much fun.
麻烦指点！
Internet is playing an important part in our daily lifes and bringing much convenience for us.We can watch news and get lots of informations.Through Internet, we can wend e-mail or make a call to our friends.Besides,Internet provides e-books to us and we can teach ourselves English.The most exciting thing I think are the entertainments such as listening to musics,watching sport games,playing computer games and shopping which can bring us much fun.
麻烦指点！
1, You should change "lifes" into life.
2,convenience is a countable noun, so how about changing "much" into "many conveniences.
3,You have to change "for" into "to"
4 information is a uncountable noun, so you must drop "s"
5You should put"the" between" through" and "internet"
6We can "send"
Ok, for the correct matters , I am not so sure, it's just for you to take my advice into consideration.
讲了网络的好处啊,可以给我们提供很多便利,对我们生活工作也有很大帮助.
不知道你想问什么? 文章写得不错啊....