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Today is the Spring Festival. I spent a happy day. Tonight we have family meals together, we have a lot of blessings. Eaten after dinner, I watched the Spring Festival Gala, I really loved that. To 11:00 minutes, firecrackers sports, the excitement, showing a picture, I love the motherland. I personally was most impressive in the process of the dumplings, this is not my first attempt, we went off smoothly. I very carefully wrapped, Snaddon dumplings, I seem to eat very fragrant! Spring Festival on this later, but this day is the happiest day of my holiday.
今天是春节。我度过了开心的一天。晚上,我们全家人一起吃饭,大家都互相祝福。吃完饭后,我收看了春节联欢晚会,我非常喜欢。到了11点钟,鞭炮声陆续响起了,北京呈现出热闹的景象,我更加热爱祖国了。最令人难忘的就是我亲手包饺子的过程了,这并不是我的第一次尝试,所以还算顺利,我小心翼翼的包着,那顿饺子,我似乎也吃得格外香!
春节就这样过去了,但是这一天,是我假期中最快乐的一天,我爱春节

你还是拿汉语来我给你翻译好了!~

汉语意思不连贯,行文没有逻辑,但我还是忠实你的原文翻译下来了:

Today is the Spring Festival. I spent a happy day. First, we had family meals together tonight and we blessed each other. After dinner, We watched the Spring Festival Gala. I really loved that. At 11:00 , firecrackers sported. Then the excting scenes had turned on in Beijing. I really love our motherland. What is unforgettable is that I made dumplings myself.This is not my first attempt,so it is fluent. I really enjoyed the dumplings.
The Spring Festival had past, but this day is the happiest day of my holiday.I love the Spring Festival.

Today is the Spring Festival. I spent a happy day. Tonight we have(had) a family meals(去掉s) together, we have(made) a lot of blessings. Eaten after dinner(Ater eating the dinner), I watched the Spring Festival Gala, I really loved that. To 11:00 minutes,(?句意不明) firecrackers sports, the excitement, showing a picture, I love the(my) motherland. I personally was most impr