UC知道帮忙改错啊谢谢!(10处)5分啊!!!!!!!!!
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Mary works at a bank.she begin working ai eight o'ciock in the moring.She stops working on five o'clock in the afternoon.
At five o'clock the bank closes.Everybody goes to home.Some people drive home.Some people take the trian.Some peoples take the bus.Mary walks home.she likes to walk.She walks,and walks,and walks,or walks.
At eight o'clock in the evening,Mary is home.He eats dinner.At ten o'clock she goes to the bed.Mary is tired.
She is eighty-two year old.
At five o'clock the bank closes.Everybody goes to home.Some people drive home.Some people take the trian.Some peoples take the bus.Mary walks home.she likes to walk.She walks,and walks,and walks,or walks.
At eight o'clock in the evening,Mary is home.He eats dinner.At ten o'clock she goes to the bed.Mary is tired.
She is eighty-two year old.
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Mary works at a bank.She begins working ai eight o'ciock in the moring.She stops working at five o'clock in the afternoon.
At five o'clock the bank closed.Everybody goes home.Some people drive home.Some people take the train.Some people take the bus.Mary walks home.She likes to walk.She walks,and walks,and walks,or walks.
At eight o'clock in the evening,Mary is at home.She is eating dinner.At ten o'clock she goes to the bed.Mary is tired.
She is eighty-two years old.