请高手帮忙看一下有没有语法错误

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/29 15:12:18
I think it's necessary to sum up the experience of learning English. Here, I want to talk about three problems about it.
First, reading a lot should be looked at the key of leaning English. Second, it is also very important to learn some articles in heart.On the one hand, rote learning is really has no advantage.On the other hand, it will benefit us by reciting some good articles.We will feel much easier when we express our thoughts in English if we have a lot of good articles in our heads. At last,it's the most important that using the knowlege we have learned in our lives.
We could improve our English by reading more, writing more,listening more and speaking more.

1.‘reading a lot should be looked at the key...’应该是‘reading a lot is the key...’或者‘reading a lot should be treated as the key...’
2.‘On the one hand, rote learning is really has no advantage’应该是‘On one hand, rote learning really has no advantage’或者‘On the one hand, rote learning really does not help much’
3.‘if we have a lot of good articles in our heads’应该是‘if we remember a lot of good articles’
4.‘it's the most important that using the knowlege we have learned in our lives’应该是‘it's the most important to use the knowlege we have learned in our daily lives’
5. ‘We could improve our English by reading more, writing more,listening more and speaking more’一般是‘We could improve our English through more reading, more writing, more listening and more speaking’

reading a lot should be looked ,可能错了。

On the one hand 错
应该是on one hand....on the other hand...

rote learning is really has no advantage 错了
应该是rote learning really has no ad